Other inherrited items: Mortal Menu -- There are so many races to feast upon but who tastes the best? This handy piece of parchment breaks down each and every race's delicious factor. Time to get some absorbing done! (+5% SP gains in one thread) & your Astral Crystal. I'm not entirely an ass~
Post by Farmer with Shotgun on Aug 19, 2019 11:08:10 GMT
Hullo there! I'm gonna need you to edit your update so that it doesn't hurt my brain to look at (and so that it's consistent with the update template (see here if unsure).
For every value which has seen a change (other than PL and health), you should show the new value first then, in brackets, your calculation (old value + earned - spent). In your case, I think it should look something like this:
Gains: + [Mission] For the York II [5553z, 788 XP, 2615 SP, 8 TP & 2 Saga Tokens] + [Event] Return of The Super Secret Santa-Stravaganza [2,000z, 500 XP, 1000 SP & 10 TP] + [Event] The Death of a Decade [2000z, 500 XP, 1000 SP & 5 TP] + The Last Minute + [Level Up] 12 [3TP] + [Level Up] 13 [3TP] + [Mission] Milk Run [6414z, 905XP, 2818 SP, 4 TP] + The Fabled Cuffs of The Talespinner
Gains: + [Mission] Field Work [3333z, 501XP, 2084 SP, 5TP] [+1] + [Event] Anti-Monkey Supplements - (+5% SP but -5% all other gains in one battle. +7% of in a battle against a Saiyan) + [Event] Piccolo Day [+20TP]
TOTAL GAINS: 3333z, 501 XP, 2084SP, 25TP
Purchases: + Tiny Piano - Battle Item - When used, add 10% of your Durability to your Agility for one Dodge this turn. [Event] + Anti-Monkey Supplements - (+5% SP but -5% all other gains in one battle. +7% of in a battle against a Saiyan) [Event]
Total: N/A
Stats: Str: 15,000 (13500 + 1500) Ki: 0 (No Change) Agi: 10,500 (10,00 + 500) Dur: 10,000 (No Change)
Earth to Yardrat, good sir... though do feel free to make purchases from the Space store on your next update as you are passing through the infinite void~
Your travel and location is just "Yardrat", you are not moving from space to yardrat across this next week, you've arrived. You arrived during the week. You are simply on Yardrat and not traveling this week.
Two other points:
When listing your XP I'd much prefer if we went with Old Level (Old current/level cap) -> New Level (New current/level cap)... instead you have Old level (Old current/level cap) ---> Current Level (Old current/new current) Which is simply bizzare.
Secondly if you could edit your initial post so that the topic's subject becomes "Update Ready" instead of my "Approved" or "Needs Attention!" that'd be grand. A large part of me wanted to simply skip this update purely cause it wasn't marked as ready.