Gabu's Update

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Basics
Location/Traveling: Current/Traveling to X
Travel Method: Ship (X travel days)
Dead or Alive:
Level: 1 (0/100) --> 6 (1,500/2,099)
Alignment: Neutral
Battle Status: Alive
Specialization: N/A
Aura:N/A

Gains
(May include up to 3 missions, 5 personal roleplays, 3 cbox/forum battles,
3 cbox/forum spars, 2 IC cbox rps, 1 master training, and unlimited misc.)

dragonballsummit.proboards.com/thread/3260/yevens-update

Purchases
- Item/Equipment: 

Learning
- Tech: -20tp

Equipment
- Removing X (-% gain), equipping Y (+% gain)
- Gains: +% Str, +% Ki, +% Gains, +% Zeni

Stats
Str: 1683 (125 + 1558)
Ki: 1683 (125 + 1558)
Agi: 1683 (125+ 1558)
Dur: 1683 (125 + 1558)

HP:2,525
PL:13,464

SP: 0 (0 + 6234 - 6234)
TP: 25 (0 + 25 - 0)
Zeni: 9645 (200 + 9445 - 0) (The 200 zeni gain is coming from Yeven, seeing as how i 

Notes
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[Serranna]

Where to begin, where to begin....

You have no location, you've got to be somewhere
While your life is a tragic formality you DO have to state if you are alive or dead.
You've listed stat gain without actually showing where the stats are coming from
Same for zenni
Same for TP

Same for EXP

Your Battle Status is either "Supressed" if you have that ability and wish to use it, or "Unsupressed".

If you're inherriting Yeven's garbage then you need to link to Yeven's most recently approved update to show this
If you're inherriting Yeven's garbage then you do not get the starting 500sp to assign, you already had that as Yeven
If you're inherriting Yeven's grabage then you do not ge thte starting 200z, you already had that as Yeven.

I cannot approve an update missing this much.