Doku Silver's Update

[Doku Silver]

Basics
Location/Traveling: Current/Traveling to X
Travel Method: Ship (X travel days)
Dead or Alive:
Level: 1 (0/100) --> 6 (1,500/2,099)
Alignment: Evil
Battle Status: Alive
Specialization: N/A
Aura:N/A

Gains
dragonballsummit.proboards.com/thread/2751/telling-tale-history-personal-arc

9445z, 1889XP, 6234 SP, 19TP

Purchases
- Item/Equipment:

Juggernaut Space Pod -  1500z - Pod (1 Person | 0 Addon Slots)

Red Scouter - 2000z -  +2% Ki | Use of the Sense Technique as if you possessed it


Learning
- Tech: -20tp

Equipment
[ Removing ] 

3500z 

9,445 - 3500 = 5,945z 

[Equipping] 

Juggernaut Space Pod + Red Scouter

Stats
Str: 1683 (125 + 1558)
Ki: 1683 (125 + 1558)
Agi: 1683 (125+ 1558)
Dur: 1683 (125 + 1558)

HP:2,525
PL:13,464

SP: 0 (0 + 6234 - 6234)
TP: 25 (0 + 25 - 0)
Zeni: 5,945z (9,445 - 3500)

[Serranna]

Ah, it's literally Yeven's old update with some purchases added. Let's get this sorted out so ya know what to do on future ones m'dude.

Location: Your current location is Midgard, you are not traveling
Travel Method: None
Dead or Alive: This should read Alive
Battle Status: You are current Unsupressed. After purchasing Supression you can opt to swap to that status instead.

Purchases: This is fine, good job
Equipment: You don't need to list money here dude, that's what Zeni is for at the bottom
Equipping: Your scouter equip is noted, you do not 'equip' transport though. The Space Pod doesn't have to be listed here.

Stats: The math is fine here
SP: Done as it should be, good job
TP: Also fine
Zeni: Math is fine however you began at 0, gained 9,445 and spent 3,500. This would normally be listed as
End Value (Start Value + Gains - Loses) .... So in this case Zeni: 5,945z (0 + 9,445 - 3,500)


Finally you're fine to name your ships and specify the color of them in RP, its highly encouraged. On purchases however we'd appreciate it if you just used the store/mission item name. The "Juggernaut Space Pod" does not exist, it's just a Space Pod. The fact it's a Juggernaut one RPwise isn't essential on the update. Just makes it easier to track your acquisitions and prevent some poor soul going "Where the hell are the stats for a red scouter? Why can't I get a purple one!"


So, approving this for ya, hopefully the next one'll be more in line~

[Doku Silver]

Basics
Location/Traveling: From Midgard To Frieza I
Travel Method: Space Pod
Dead or Alive: Alive
Level: 1 (0/100) --> 6 (1,500/2,099)
Alignment: Evil
Battle Status: Alive
Specialization: N/A
Aura:N/A

Gains

n/a

Purchases
- Item/Equipment:
n/a


Learning
n/a

Equipment 

- Space Pod

- Red Scouter

Stats
Str: 1683
Ki: 1683
Agi: 1683
Dur: 1683

HP:2,525
PL:13,464

SP: 0 
TP: 25 
Zeni: 5,945z

[Captain Ginyu]